Friday, January 22, 2010

FLASH 55 FICTION FRIDAY - "One Step"

It begins with one step and so I started that walk.
Every night around the track.

Solid soles hitting the crushed gravel.
And so it goes with one step...I start the journey of discovery.

Finding insight in the heavens above; breathing in oxygen to cleanse the solid soul.
Challenges await...

I continue to walk!

11 comments:

Brian Miller said...

keep walking. i cant walk a track personally, i like to hike and head out through the woods...but find the walk very therapeutic. nice 55.

mine is up!

Nessa said...

Very good 55 and inspiring. Keep it up.

Boy Meets Girl in 55

Anonymous said...

Really nice 55 ~ very inspiring. I LOVE to walk...cleanses my soul too.


I'm up after a few weeks hiatus:

Friday Flash 55 ~ Fortress

g-man said...

Either you are Forrest Gump, or you still are following your resolution!
I loved this Lulda...
Great job, it was well worth the wait
Have a Kick Ass Week-End....G

One Prayer Girl said...

Very nice 55.

"...breathing in oxygen to cleanse the solid soul." I loved this thought. Very poetic.

PG

Zuzana said...

Beautiful! It is all in that one first step.;)
Have a lovely weekend,
xo
Zuzana

secret agent woman said...

Good for you! I made a commitment to walking and have been out every day that we've had half-way decent weather, and on the gazelle walker-thingy machine on the rest, all month.

Hilary said...

That first step is all important.. so true.

Land of shimp said...

This was quite inspirational, no small accomplishment with so few words!

Keep walking and congratulations on your post of the week mention over at Hilary's!

Daryl said...

Congrats on POTW mention from Hilary

Maude Lynn said...

I really like this. In fact, I really need to DO this!