He was late...the train left the station an hour ago.
Damn - this was the story of his life.
Always the last to find out the news.
Always last to get the girl...
He sat on the bench and dropped his bag onto the ground.
He noticed a crumpled lottery ticket.
A train whistle blew...
If you have a 55 to share stop by the G-Man and let him know at Mr. KnowItAll.
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His life may not improve with the lottery ticket. You know..sudden wealth, money can't buy love, the best things in life are free, blah, blah..
but at least next time he gets dumped he can take a plane;)
With his luck, the crumbled lotto ticket was probably a no win. I never win.
Good 55.
From the most unexpected turns ... :-)
Nicely done.
If it's crumpled it's probably not a winner - but I hope it is! :)
Always a hint of mystery Lulda...
You are like the Garbo of blogdom!
Thank you for contributing on time this week, you've made me exceedingly happy.
Have a Kick-Ass Week-End....G
I love open ended fiction. One can keep surmising!
Did he win? Did he win? Geez, I can't stand not knowing!!!!! Nice 55!
Fun story. I love filling in the blanks.
wishing him a bit of luck...
Thank for reminding me I have to check my ticket now...OH Yeah nice 55.
Ah, I hope he won!!! Glad to see you back.;)) xo
Probably one my losing tickets- Lord knows I've my share and somebody else's!
You sure can turn out a good mystery.
Lulda - For second place in the caption contest, I have a prize to send you. You can use the email in my profile to make arrangements. My wife, pheromone girl, says this would be the best method of communication.
Excellent Flash 55 ---one to think about.
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