Thursday, November 12, 2009

FLASH 55 FICTION FRIDAY - "Young Innocent Fools"

" Hey kids, come here."
"You want to make some money?"

"Sure Mista...what do we have to do?"

"Just put these flyers on all the cars in the parking lot...
I'll meet you all back here."

We dashed and darted...and slapped hundreds of windsheilds.

"Hey, where is that guy?"
Ah, young innocent fools!
If you have a 55 park it and shout out to the g-man at Mr. Know-It-All!

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

Now that's some cheap labor for you! Mean old guy taking advantage of some young future business owners ~ he'll get his :-)

I'm up:

Friday Flash 55 ~ DELETE

Brian Miller said...

oh man! i would have hunted him down...getting the money first next time. great 55!

mine is up!

One Prayer Girl said...

Love this. Guess what!!! - we're on the same wavelength. I wrote a 55 about childhood memories too.

PG

Monkey Man said...

Taking advantage of kids...for shame. Great 55. My 55 is here.

Zuzana said...

Lovely pictures and a great sentiment. Thank goodness for innocent minds.;)
Have a lovely weekend,
xo
Zuzana

Hootin Anni said...

The turd! They should find the old geezer and repay him in some way!! Where's the egg carton...I know where he lives. Let's get 'im!!!

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the walking man said...

Sad for the naivete but funny.

Dr.John said...

Great 55 but a very bad man.
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.

Dulçe ♥ said...

Oh how cruel...poor guys... and clever cheat!
up there somewhere is mine
HAve a noce weekend!

buffalodick said...

Anybody that screws kids or old people out of their share, should have their ass kicked around the moon! Such is my Opinion, humble as it may be...

Akelamalu said...

Oh that was just MEAN!!!

Did that actually happen? The dirty rotter!

Mine's up.

g-man said...

I love Brits...Dirty Rotter!
Hahahahaha...
Lulda Dear...I just LOVE your wry wit!
Excellent 55!!!!
Thank You so much for your weekly post.
And the Albatross?
Off The Fucking Chart Awesome...:P
You Rock from Fredericksburg to Blacksburg!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End....G

Hilary said...

Oooh.. cruel.. but those kids have now learned to get paid for something like this up front. Tough lesson.. fine 55. :)

Maude Lynn said...

What a meanie!

Mona said...

That happens all too often ion India!

Lulda Casadaga said...

Thanks guys for stopping by.Yes, this was from my childhood...I think that was the first time my blood pressure went up!! :)