Friday, August 14, 2009

FLASH 55 FICTION FRIDAY -"Spinning Top"


Like a Whirly-gig she spun out of control.
The hands of time were moving faster than a spinning top.
She felt like she was in quicksand or molasses.
She was in slow motion while life past her by like a tornado.
Get a grip, right now...she thought!
Was he the cause of this chaos??
If you have a 55 post it and go check in with the g-man at Mr. KnowItAll.

16 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Relationships can do that. A marvellous 55.

Lulda Casadaga said...

thanks anthonynorth! Yes, we spin those crazy webs...:D

big Jenn said...

Great 55. Thanks for stopping by!jeNN

clean and crazy said...

awe i am so there!!! love this 55 thanks for stopping by!!

One Prayer Girl said...

Love that picture.

The "he"s in my life used to have me spinning like a top - chaotically. But never again, I HOPE!

PG

Fandango said...

You humans are always causing that crazy romantic spinning stuff. When will you learn things are just the way things are.
Good 55

Dr.John said...

What has my head spinning now are five grand kids. By the time they finish with me I'm not sure which direction I'm going in.
Great 55

Mine is posted
HERE.

CJ said...

Great 55 this week.

Anonymous said...

He probably was!!!

the walking man said...

the cause of chaos is within the one who is being chaotic.

Lou said...

Men..can't live with them, and can't shoot them.

Great 55.

G-Man said...

Lulda Dear...?
I hope this is fiction.
Either way this is a Great 55, and I have missed you.
Glad to see ya back....G

Zuzana said...

Ah, I identify with the sentiment of "life passes her by". Sometimes I get the feeling that life does pass me by in some areas.;))
Glad to see you back again.;))

Lulda Casadaga said...

big Jenn: Thanks for coming by...

c&c: we all have those days-weeks-years...:D

prayer g: the ebb & flow of relationships...:D

Fandango: but do dragons have a lot of hot air? can be just as chaotic...:P

Dr.John: thanks for stopping by and godspeed with those grandkids...eat your Wheaties! :)

CJ: thanks! :)

Vicki: thanks for poppin by!

thewman: ye be always the philosopher over there...:D

Lou: Well maybe ya can shoot them with a water pistol or paintgun! ;)

G-Man: Part fiction/part truth! Miss ya too...;)

Protege: thanks for stopping by...
I was thinkin about ya today...I'll have to drop by your place soon! :)

Akelamalu said...

That's not a great place to be, better when everything stops spinning! Great 55 m'dear. :)

buffalodick said...

The world does the spinning through space- we're just along for the ride...